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Most of us made the final leg of the journey   she’d been gone herself. It was the closest I got
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                     alone. When mine ended at the Tampa Interna-  to crying to my parents.
                     tional Airport, there was no celebration waiting for     Six months later, I emerged at the Tampa   25
                     me. No screaming spectators or clicking flashbulbs,     airport. I had been in transit for eight days,
                     no important hands to shake. The air wasn’t filled   including nearly 24 hours of straight flight time
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                     with patriotic music or glitter blowing off home-  from Afghanistan to Turkey to Germany to
                     made signs. I didn’t need to elbow through throngs   Baltimore, where I had sleepwalked through
                     of camouflage to find who I was looking for.   a few-hour layover. My internal clock was
                          I’d been gone 349 days. From Afghanistan,   stuck halfway around the world. My head was
                     I emailed my family frequently and called   straining through a thick fog to make sense of
                     when my work schedule, the 12-and-a-half   the sleek terminal and bright windows, people
                     hour time difference, and third world technol-  in civilian clothes, neon restaurant signs, the
                     ogy allowed. I’d shielded them from much. I   discordant symphony of music and newscasts
                     didn’t talk about the creeping fear that even   and flight updates, the missing weight against
                     50 pounds of body armor couldn’t keep away;   my thigh where my pistol should be  holstered.
                     the local attacks that sent ripples of paranoia   I felt like I was on another planet.
                     through our tiny, vulnerable compound. I       Then I saw my family. My six-foot-two
                     didn’t mention the frustration and hopeless-  brother was easy to spot at the end of the
                     ness that clouded daily operations, each small   terminal ramp. Next to him was his girlfriend,
                     victory overshadowed by corruption, violence,   holding a small American flag, and my parents,
                     or bureaucratic red tape. I didn’t admit my   straining against the security rope. All my senses
                       isolation — even on a base crowded with sol-  zeroed in on them. My mom yelled, “There she
                     diers, contractors and local Afghan workers.   is! There’s Lauren!” Then I was seven years old
                     Once, in a phone call, Mom told me it was   and running into her arms, crying into her hair.
                     harder for her having me deployed than when     And for a moment, the world was perfect.



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                          Even though she served actively in Afghanistan, Johnson spends less than a paragraph on
                          Even though she served actively in Afghanistan, Johnson spends less than a paragraph on
                        her time there. Read the following excerpt from  War , by journalist Sebastian Junger, who
                        spent 14 months embedded with soldiers fighting in Afghanistan. Unlike Johnson, Junger
                        includes vivid details of combat.
                                from War

                                Sebastian Junger
                               There had been some contact earlier in the day, and Second Platoon spotted what they
                           thought was an enemy position on top of Hill 1705. A twenty-five-man element, including
                           two Afghan soldiers and an interpreter, left the wire at Phoenix in early evening and
                           started walking south. They walked in plain view on the road and left during daylight
                           hours, which were two things they’d never do again, at least not at the same time. They
                           passed the villages of Aliabad and Loy Kalay and then crossed a bridge over a western

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