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Topics for Composing
                       17. Analysis.  Overall, what is Alvarez suggesting about the role that language played in shaping
                         her own identity? What evidence from the narrative supports your interpretation?
                         18. Argument.  Do you agree with Alvarez when she suggests that speaking the native language
                                                                        /
                         of a country is essential to feeling at home there? Explain.
                         19. Connections. When have you ever felt caught between cultures like Alvarez describes? Your   central text
                         experience might be similar to hers, based on language and geography, or it could be   Julia Alvarez
                         subcultures in school, on sports teams, or other groups.
                         20. Speaking and Listening.  A few times in this narrative, Alvarez expresses how difficult it is to
                         communicate her thoughts fully in Spanish because she has only the vocabulary of a ten-year-
                         old. If you have studied more than one language, try using your second language to explain a
                         scientific, mathematical, or historical concept you learned in another class this year to
                         someone who also speaks that language. If you have not studied a second language, try
                         explaining the concept with only the word choice of a ten-year-old in English. What did you
                         learn about the challenges of communication through this exercise?
                         21. Research.  Alvarez is frustrated at times with her inability to communicate in Spanish, which
                         is the language used by her parents and potential boyfriend. Conduct research by interviewing
                         a friend or a family member who has experienced a language barrier. Explain the challenges,
                         frustrations, or benefits that you learned about through your research.
                                                         La Gringuita
                         22. Creative Writing. Write a poem about communication challenges you have experienced that
                         includes words in English and words in at least one other language that you know well or are
                                                          Julia Alvarez
                         studying in school. The words could be translations of each other, or different ideas expressed
                         in the different languages. Share your poem with a partner for feedback on the use of multiple
                                                                  Julia Alvarez (b. 1950) was born in New York but raised in the
                         languages. What is communicated effectively and what is not? Revise if necessary.
                                                      Dominican Republic until she was ten, her family fleeing to the
                                                      Dominican Republic until she was ten, her family fleeing to the   central text
                                                      United States after her father became involved in an unsuccessful
                                                      United States after her father became involved in an unsuccessful
                                                      plot to overthrow the dictator Rafael Trujillo. She received a BA
                           conversation               plot to overthrow the dictator Rafael Trujillo. She received a BA   Jeff Malet Photography/Newscom
                                                      from Middlebury College and an MA from Syracuse University.
                                                      from Middlebury College and an MA from Syracuse University.
                                                      Alvarez has published poetry, fiction, memoir, and children’s books.
                                                      Alvarez has published poetry, fiction, memoir, and children’s books.
                                                          3.  How does the design of the graph help illustrate just how far behind other countries the United
                                                      “La Gringuita” is from a collection of autobiographical essays,
                                                      “La Gringuita” is from a collection of autobiographical essays,
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                         What is the relationship between language  States is?    ,  in which the author examines identity
                                               /
                                                        Something to Declare (1998),  in which the author examines identity
                                                          4.  Comparison. Based on what you read in “La Gringuita,” how might Alvarez respond to the
                       and power?              Narrative  and the art of writing.
                                                           findings in this graph?
                                                          5.  Informing Your Argument. How does this graph relate to the prompt you have been thinking
                         Who has the most power in a classroom? In many cases, it’s the teachers because   and chew on her ear.    My mother gave him an
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                                                    he inevitable, of course, has happened. I
                                                           about —  What should society or individuals do to ensure that there are not significant
                       they have the authority to speak without having to be called on. Who has the power in   indignant look, stood up, and went in search
                                                           differences in equality or power based on language?
                                                     Tnow speak my native language “with an
                       the media and advertising? Those who create, edit, and present the words and images.   of the conductor to report this fresh  man.
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                                                   accent.” What I mean by this is that I speak
                       They can influence what people believe, how people vote, what they buy. Who has   Decades later, hearing the story, my father, ever
                       They can influence what people believe, how people vote, what they buy. Who has
                                                   perfect childhood Spanish, but if I stray into
                       the power in a courtroom? It’s often the judge who determines who gets to speak and   vigilant and jealous of his wife and daughters,
                       the power in a courtroom? It’s often the judge who determines who gets to speak and
                                                   a heated discussion or complex explanation,
                       what can be said during a trial.   I have to ask, “Por favor ¿puedo decirlo en   was convinced — no matter what my mother
                                                                 Entering the Conversation
                                                   ingles?” Can I please say it in English?
                           Power can be gained and wielded through language. Sadly, the reverse is also
                           Power can be gained and wielded through language. Sadly, the reverse is also   said about idiomatic expressions — that the
                                                    How and why did this happen?
                       often true: those without access to the dominant language used by institutions like
                       often true: those without access to the dominant language used by institutions like   sailor had made an advance. He, himself, was
                                                            Throughout this Conversation, you have read a variety of texts that deal with lan-
                                                          guage and the ways that it relates to power. Now it’s time to enter the conversation by
                       schools, government, the justice system, and business can be left without the power
                       schools, government, the justice system, and business can be left without the power   never comfortable in English. In fact, if there
                                                    When we emigrated to the United States in

                                                          responding the prompt you’ve been thinking about —  What should society or individ-
                       they should have otherwise.   the early sixties, the climate was not favorable   were phone calls to be made to billing offices,
                                                          uals do to ensure that there are not significant differences in equality or power
                                                   for retaining our Spanish. I remember one scene   medical supply stores, Workman’s Compen-

                                                          based on language?  Follow the steps below to write your argument.
                                                   in a grocery store soon after we arrived. An   sation, my father would put my mother on the
                                                   elderly shopper, overhearing my mother speak- 185      phone. She would get better results than he
                                                             1. | Building on the Conversation.   Locate one additional text on this topic that you
                                                          think adds an interesting perspective to this Conversation. This text can be of any type:
                                                   ing Spanish to her daughters, muttered that if we   would with his heavy, almost incomprehensi-
                                                          an argument, a narrative, a poem, a painting, or even a film clip. Before you decide on
                                                   wanted to be in this country, we should learn the   ble accent.
                                                          adding this text to the Conversation, be sure that it is a credible and relevant source,
                                                   language. “I do know the language,” my mother   At school, there were several incidents of   5
                                                          which you can determine by evaluating it with the skills you practiced in Chapter 4
                                                   said in her boarding-school English, putting   name-calling and stone-throwing, which our
                                                          (p. 99). Read and annotate the text carefully, making connections to other texts in the
                                                   the woman in her place. She knew the value of   teachers claimed would stop if my sisters and I
                                                          Conversation and “La Gringuita” (p. 177).

                                                   speaking perfect English. She had studied for   joined in with the other kids and quit congre-

                                                                2. | Making a Claim.   Look back through the table you created and your notes on

                                                   several years at Abbot Academy, flying up from   gating together at recess and jabbering away in
                                                          the texts in the conversation and write a statement that reflects your overall position
                                                   the Island to New York City, and then taking the   Spanish. Those were the days before bilingual
                                                          about what steps society or individuals should take to ensure there are not significant
                                                   train up to Boston. It was during the war, and   education or multicultural studies, when kids
                                                          differences in power based on language. This statement will be your thesis or claim
                                                   the train would sometimes fill with servicemen,
                                                   every seat taken.   that you will try to prove in the rest of your argument.
                                                                           1    Chew on her ear: the idiom “chew someone’s ear off” means to talk
                                                             3. | Organizing the Ideas.
                                                    One time, a young sailor asked my mother The texts in this Conversation offer a number of
                                                                          to someone for a long time and in a boring manner. —Eds.
                                                   if he could sit in the empty seat beside her   2  Fresh: lewd, disrespectful. —Eds.
                                                          explanations of how language and power are related. Review the table you have been
              Guided Tour of Foundations of Language & Literature, Second Edition
                                                          keeping throughout this Conversation and identify the texts and quotations that either
                                                                                Conversation
                                               Central Text  directly support or oppose the claim that you wrote in the earlier step.
                                                             4. | Writing the Argument.  Now that you have a claim that reflects your informed   177
                       5 Narrative            Julia Alvarez,  La Gringuita     stance, it is time to write your argument. Be sure that your writing stays focused on
                                                                              What is the relationship between

                                                          your position on the issue . Refer to at least two Conversation texts, which could
                                                                      language and power?

                                                          include the additional text you found to support your position. Review Chapter 4
                                                          (p. 119) to remind yourself of how to use sources in your own writing and refer to
                                                          the Writing an Argument Workshop in Chapter 7 (p. 466) for additional help with
                                                          constructing and supporting your argument.
                       6 Fiction          Amy Tan,  Two Kinds         5. | Presenting the Argument (Optional). Once you have written your argument, you
                                                                              How are our interests and passions

                                                          might want to present it to the class or a small group. Review how to write and deliver
                                                                      shaped?
                                                          a presentation in Chapter 3 (p. 90) and Chapter 7 (p. 479).
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                       7 Argument         Steve Almond,  Is It Immoral to        Is fandom a positive or negative force in

                                      Watch the Super Bowl ?          our lives?
                       8 Poetry           Langston Hughes,  Let America Be       How do we find common ground?

                                      America Again
                       9 Exposition        Jon Ronson,  How One Stupid        To what extent can we influence social,

                                      Tweet Blew Up Justine Sacco’s Life       cultural, or political change online?
                          10 Drama        William Shakespeare,  The Tragedy        Do we make better decisions with our

                                      of Romeo and Juliet             “gut” or with our rational brain?
                          11 Mythology        Homer, from  The Odyssey          What defines a hero?

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