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                    usefulness in serving as evidence for your claim and for its effectiveness for your
                    intended audience.
                       To do this, you must think carefully about how well the evidence supports           COMPOSITION WORKSHOP
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                    the line of reasoning. Just because information is presented doesn’t mean that it
                    effectively supports the claim. In short, information about the topic that doesn’t
                    support a line of reasoning is not relevant — it’s just information.
                       Information becomes evidence when you use it effectively to support your
                    line of reasoning. You may draw on a variety of types of evidence; however, some
                    types of evidence may be more effective depending on the audience or situation.
                    For example, an audience of your peers will think differently about cell phone use
                    than the school administration. That means you must provide evidence to appeal
                    to your audience’s logic or emotion or to establish your credibility or authority all
                    in service of your message.

                     Reasons                Evidence to Support Your Reasons
                     Students become addicted   •  Statistics relating how many times we look at
                     to their phones and are   our phones or how long it takes to return to the
                     pulled away with every alert,   activity
                     distracting themselves and   •  Study about how phones distract fellow
                     others.                  classmates and the instructor
                     Students compromise     •  Personal anecdote of seeing cheating incidents
                     academic honesty by      during tests and of AirDrop pictures of exam
                     looking up answers or    pages
                     texting during exams.   •  Easy access to resources has increased the
                                              amount of plagiarism

                       The following is a visual that illustrates how most arguments are organized.



                                                 STRUCTURE OF AN ARGUMENT



                                           CLAIM (IDEA + PERSPECTIVE)                   Thesis

                                                                                        Line of reasoning:
                             REASON 1              REASON 2             REASON 3        Each reason
                                                                                        justi es the claim
                                                                                        Evidence
                       EVIDENCE  EVIDENCE  EVIDENCE  EVIDENCE  EVIDENCE  EVIDENCE  EVIDENCE  EVIDENCE  EVIDENCE  supports the
                                                                                        reasoning
                                                                                        Commentary
                            COMMENTARY            COMMENTARY           COMMENTARY       connects evidence,
                                                                                        reasoning, and claim













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